Sunday, September 18, 2011

MILESTONE POEM


M I L E S T O N E

By design, God bless my parent
Afford to raise me up
Let me  sail, far away
Even as the only son

By incident, a next milestone set
In between volcano and Sultanate
Student of reputable college
with knowledge and humble heart

By working hard, step a high ladder
in State Bank chair
Save for family dreaming
in property and own company

By nurture, raise up sweet kids
send beyond country border
the best college as they could
As a capital in the future

By God bless, set next milestone
to see my kids a happy couples
With a bright job position
I had fought a good fight
I had finished the race
I had kept the faith


Various comments came up when I posted my long Poem on Face Book last September 2011 that beyond my expectation and unconscious such positive impact, inspired to some of them. I really feel blessed  share my own life journey to others, even never met before


A friend from Surabaya, eat Java, Mr Fredy wrote his comment : 

Nice poetry...I'm so interested to the end of it.."I had fought a good fight,I had finished the race,I had kept the faith"...It has been reflecting how great you invite Jesus' interference in your life is.Thank you very much,Mr.Pinondang Situmeang.You inspire me so much...JBU

My long friend from Queensland, Australia, Mrs. Enny Whites wrote;
You are full of inspiration, Ama. I'm sure your family is very proud of you and your achievement. I'm very pleased to be able to call you FRIEND. Thanks for tagging me. Have a lovely day,...... :)


A very short remarked coming from Uwie Bungsurabani, a lady from Bandung, West Java
You are my inspiration...Just one in my mind you are the goooooooood father. Its so special for me. Terima kasih sudah menjadi Guru yang baik (Indonesia), means Thanks to be a good Teacher

The first comments wrote by a Lady from The Netherlands, Miss Anne Sthalie Awang, what crossed to her mind when reading my poem is a song for a good father :
Bung Pin, they have a song for all the good parents "YOU RAISE ME UP ". its very good song from West Life.....

Tree points raised by a friend from Jakarta, Arye Mira M, hard work, humble and faith. The complete comments as follows :
Truly extraordinary struggle yourself
you've learned from the hard work yourself
stay humble and strong in faith
God has always guided you with His Love...GBU


A girls who always called my Uncle (Tulang)  from the 1st time add as a friend, Vera Goodchild wrote a simple comment but warm as :

Beautiful!!! The beauty of real life framed as beautiful as its poem. Thanks for tagging me Tulang :)

A few more positive comments coming out from
  • Mrs. Naniek Trickey from Washington State : You are blessed with wonderful children
  • A Guru in Haiku, the Japanese style poetry, Mr. Wahyu W Basjir wrote : Homage to parents, never fails to touch me straight to the heart
  • Mr.Bambang Pinuji, my old friend in Kemudian.com, poetry communities wrote :Lovely poem, the race of my life just half of it.
  • Bella Kendy Purba, my other niece from Bandung, West Java said : "Nice poem Uncle, there is too many poet about mother, but not about Father".

  • A well known poetry in our community, kemudian com from Asmat, Papua island, Mrs.Dewi Linggasari said : The so long trip in poem. Good luck

    Some friends (14), show me respect by thumb their finger up, Widyastuty Widijono, Nia Erni Miha Balo, Angelica Gay Fang, Pelangi senja, Yulius Tarigan, Nita Soepardjan, Mey Mey Simarmata,  Aan Suradi Landena, Rike Jokanan, Mey Situngkir, Sherly Kilapong, Donna Connie, Willas Litik, Yulius Leonarta Tarigan

    Thanks you so much my dear friends to placed a compliment remarks that readers of this Blog, Jingga senja could inspired to set their milestones in their life journey, the best for the sake of the family, the love one.

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